Acoustic Sensitivity

It was nice. One question, are you somehow being bullied physically or emotionally? I don't know but you seem to be so because of this poem. Anyway good job.

Okay, I get what you were trying to say here but what I can't understand is why you named this, "Shadows"? I just don't get it.

Wow, nice lyrics. The title clearly fits it. I especially love the chorus. Anyway great job.

It was nice. It clearly paints the picture that you want to show the readers but I don't think this is a song. It's sounds more of a poem. Anyway ...

I no longer fear of being alone That's one grammar mistake. It should be, "I no longer fear being alone". It's okay I don't think it will ruin the melody ...

Nice lyrics. Are you somehow a fan of hard rock or death metal? Because I think you are based on the lyrics that you made.

When Heroes Fall Pride, that keeps me going From falling off the ground Whenever I keep on flying It covers the truth That I want to hide Hope, that keeps ...

Bliss I just woke up early this morning Feeling so refreshed and bubbly That I did not notice that It was only 6:30 Not my usual time of the day ...

Poetry in Motion I know how you always like the way How I smile at you and say, You're the reason that makes my day Feel like heaven everyday You ...

The Beauty of a Rape Scene Love is a lost word So stop searching Hope is a broken road So stop struggling Feel your everything, losing As they unleashed Their ...

Shattered This bottle is my 7th now Still it didn't bring me down I've put all my faith into these Still no feeling of bliss I hope to redeem this ...

Red Old Man Here comes the cold But there's no snow falling December 25 Just another ordinary day No surprise on that day, just any day, any day One smiling ...

Meteor Here I am Hear me now I'm falling down Here I am Feel me now I'll take your every breath away High above Above the clouds I'm coming down ...

This is a lyric of a song...

The Signs I'm tired of waiting Searching for all the places I can find, you Endlessly searching For all the bizarre answers That's going around in crops of circles Hoping ...